Do you think This could get published?

I love your writing style. The prologue is very interesting and it goes very deep, which is great for a prologue. A prologue should make the reader think and connect it to their own lives. Some parts are a little wordy and need to be rearranged, but that' s not too hard to do. Please continue writing this. I think it will be worthy of publishing if you continue to write it this well.